That was pretty hilarious. I liked your Luna, although she doesn't wear glasses, so that part was a bit off.

The treatment of the goblin cart ride as a roller coaster was brilliantly done.

This was just *excellent*. Really. Like all of your work it's professional-grade in style and grammar, so I can just sit back and expend 100% of my brainpower on just enjoying the story, rather than wading through errors and stilted prose and the like.

And the story was excellent; I just loved the humour. I honestly found myself 'chuckling out loud' several times. Just as well that I'd saved this story for some quality reading time on the weekend rather than lunchtime at work!

The recurring joke of Harry's enjoying the Goblin cart rides was a nice backbone to the structure of the tale, with all the other bits and pieces attached here and there. Adding Luna allowed for even more whimsy. I still grin when I think of the line:

- The backpack didn’t comment.

I guess Spikestaff's protection was another long-running joke, although for only half the story.

Your various inventions - memory-learning, pensieve movies - were nice innovative additions to the wizarding world, too.

Thank you very much for this story, I greatly enjoyed it!!

hm any chance that the green jelly monster blob will reappear in another fic?

Ha, Harry effectively drained all enjoyment the goblins get from having a fearful passenger on the cart ride.

Really nice idea, the purchasing of memories.

Wow, amazing, Harry isn't going to have a mansion in his trunk. The novelty of it all.

A bodyguard does make sense.

Sporkstab. Great.

A card shark to boot.

Good to see Wizards aren't denied the wonders of an arcade.

Now there's a concept, escorts for your animal.

Nice little bit with Sirius.

Nice little fluffy story.

Fun as usual ))

lol bodyguard :)
Great bunny

LOL! More, give me more!

An excellent read. I know that if it were I in his shoes then I think that I would have done much the same. I would love to see this sequeled though.

That was awesome, I've never laughed so hard at a Harry Potter story in my entire life! Absolutely genius that was! Very well done!

Boys. I mean honestly. Go Luna!

Woot! Ninja goblins, dancing dogs and veela contortionists. What more can you want in a Harry Potter story? Well aside from the beginnings of one of the best ships available to HP fandom.

Seriously, great story and great read.

What an awesome story!

i liked this;) it was... er. um, good;) loved it. i now see you have a bit of oneshots;) nice

Ha! This story is awesome. I should have read this far sooner.

Love the goblin cart rides. And Luna always spotting the ninja goblin bodyguard.

quite a lot of fun - and no one who reads and enjoys fanfics should be bothered by a little creative, and credited, borrowing.

Loved the send ups of the whole magical trunk living quarters etc genre.

thanks for sharing