Reviews for Landing in the Wrong Place

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devilangel123 2008-07-20 ch 3,	abuseYuzzah! It is updated! Really though, your writing has improved quite a bit since the first chapter! Even though I have no clue where this chapter is leading us to, but hey, that's part of the fun ;D Please continue!
Addie133 2008-07-20 ch 18,	abuseYay, new chapter!! 8D It's been a while, huh? Looks like Kaylyn and Ryan are beginning to scare/amuse people with their antics. Glad to see Kaylyn singing again too, lol. Aw, but Malik was kinda mean, he should've let them in. XD I don't think broccoli should die. I love broccoli. (hides from broccoli haters)
The Copper Arabian 2008-07-19 ch 4,	abuse:D Big huge smile Great job, I hope this guy isn't going to hurt her :( he seems like a nice guy but who knows O.o
The Copper Arabian 2008-07-19 ch 2,	abuseGreat job :) You do a great job and have a funny sarcastic character!
devilangel123 2008-07-10 ch 1,	abuseThis is genius! I love this story! I found myself yelling and laughing hysterically at the computer monitor 12 in the morning... eh heh he... No seriously, really great story, please continue! XD
Potzy375 2008-06-16 ch 17,	abuseIt's funny when Malik showed up 'I' felt like jumping up and down too. weird huh? LOL. I love Malik, he's just so cool. Can't wait to see how Kaylyn meets Altair. Welp. My mommy is yellin' at me to help with somethin' so I got to scram. Talk to ya next review! Potzy375 ;)
Ruler of the Twinkling Gnom... 2008-05-08 ch 17,	abuseYeah!! an update! i actually forgot about this for a while till i checked my email one day and i got a story alert. so you finally threw malik in there. that adds alot of awesome to the bucket. i thought he was hilarious in the game cuz it seemed like he was constantly pms-ing, hahaha. neway this chapter was great and funny as usual, and putting ryan and kaylin together makes things more amusing. you rule.
Addie133 2008-05-07 ch 17,	abuseOH SHIZNAZZ! IT'S MALIK! XD Yup, it's been a while since you last updated, lol, but that's okay. I just can't believe how patient I was. Schoolwork kept me occupied most of the time though, and I also read the Jurassic Park novels (yes, I've seen the movies but never read the books), which aren't like the movies at all. Oh jeez, is Khairiya's life turning into a soap? Oh, the drama! I'm happy now that Kaylyn and Ryan are together again, and I love how they mess with people. The part where the two of them act all dramatic reminds me of me and my brother. We do that all the time, lol. I was so shocked/excited/happy/traumatized when Malik showed up at the end. Me and my bro always liked to think of ways we could mess with him, since he's got the whole one-arm thing goin on. Yeah, it's not nice, but it's fun. XD
PsychoWing 2008-04-22 ch 16,	abuseAmusing story. Not sure I want to know how much trouble the siblings are going to manage to cause now that they're back together, but looking forward to it all the same.
kez92p9 2008-04-21 ch 16,	abusethis fic is great but we aint met Altair yet.. Update soon please! ~-K-~
misikoblossom 2008-04-08 ch 16,	abuseGreat descriptions as usual, great length, and wonderful plotline! I love how your fic is becoming "epic", in a sort of sense... though I really enjoy the scenes with the main character and her brother, please do bring in Altair, perhaps... as it is a AC fic. :) but if you don't, tis not a huge deal - your fic is lovely on its own. :) Do update soon!
Potzy375 2008-04-04 ch 16,	abuseYay indeed! I was wondering when they'd finally find each other. of course the chapter was awesome as always. Liked the part where Kaylyn was yelling at the templars, pretty funny. and the last bit about templars being jelous was hilarious. I had to cover my mought with my hand to keep from bursting out laughing. I'm supposed to be in bed right now...sh...hehe. I walk as quiet as a cat, the only problenm is our floor squeaks, I'm in the proccess of memmorizing where to walk and not to walk. It's a slow proccess though. but anyway sweetness on the chapter and Update when ya can I can't wait! Potzy375
XinnLajgin 2008-04-02 ch 16,	abuseVery funny and entertaining story that I'm looking forward to reading more of.
Addie133 2008-03-28 ch 16,	abuseOmg finally! Cosette/Kaylyn is finally reunited with Ryan! squeals I definitely like the name Kaylyn way more than Cosette, so I'm glad that's been revealed. X3 And the thing with the templars hiding in the sand was a suspenseful moment for me, cuz you know, since I have this problem with sand, I kind of have a fear of things being underneath sand. XD Like, I'm always extra cautious when I go to the beach, because I think crabs or stingrays might be hiding beneath my feet, lol. And I get nervous whenever I see someone being buried in sand. Yeah... it's weird. But I don't think you're unconsciously reading my life or anything. Just my problem with sand, lol. I got so excited when Kaylyn (I love that name! no more Cosette, woo!) saw that Rashid was missing a finger. And I liked him even more when I saw that he was SO close to stabbing Didiane! If only he tripped or something while he had the knife at her neck. >:)
Ruler of the Twinkling Gnom... 2008-03-28 ch 16,	abuseYEAH REUNION OF THE SIBLINGS! i've been waiting for this moment for all my life! ok, maybe not all my life, but it was still like 15 chapters. but that was awesome. and the templars hiding in the sand was pretty sneaky. somethin tells me that didiane's uncle might be a character we know? or maybe it's just my brain being overcome by the foreboding feeling, or maybe i'm just being an idiot. and rashid/farid's an assassin. yeah! this story keeps gettin better and better.

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