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LocoGreggo
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseCute story. Great job.
ThnksFrThMmrs87
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseOh my amazingness!
Alexandra Khayman
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseAww, cute was this one. And the fairytale was really inspiring. :D Loved it. I haven't heard of it before, but I don't know much about Mexican fairytales. (got me curious to know more)
Fiesta Fluff foxdvd.. Perfect combination! :D
KickassScot
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseAww...so cute & fluffy. Hadn't heard the fairy tale, but like your Flack agree that all are fairly predictable. Loved the loaf of bread btw.
THE CSI'S JUNKIE
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseI have heard a version of the fairtale but I wasn't as good as this story! I loved it. Wait...I love all Feista stories!! :-D
CarolinaH.Manning
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseI like it. I love fairy tales and Fiesta and fairy tales is a perfect combination. and my sugar-resistance is rather high :)
feathergirl926
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseCute fic! Where is the challenge from?
TessaStarDean
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseThat was so unbelievably awesome. I've never heard that fairy tale before but it was great. Love it!
Aphina
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseHey, I've never heard the tale befoe, but I have a passion for fairytales and ledgends. i loved that story, it really moved me esp the end where Flack showed Stella his own version if the fairytale.

i lvoe the wayyou write, you make it believable and the chas come to life!
The Little Corinthian
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseThat was awesome! Interesting fairy tale, too- I love hearing stories from around the world. And if you can have a cool fairy tale, Fiesta goodness, and a generous sprinkling of fluff all in one fic, I say it's a job well done :0) Great job!
hockeymom
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseI love fairy tales, especially ones with Flack as the prince.
TwistedSister03
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseaw that was so sweet! i so like that fairy tale better =]
SallyJetson
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseI haven't heard the story before but I like how Flack played it to his advantage. Oranges are very sweet fruit indeed!
marialisa
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abusePure sugar - creates a lovely headrush!

Nice progression from the initial flirting to Flacks declaration of love. Bet they didn't get much more report writing done!
nyakattia
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseI had not heard this story before, but agree with Flack, it was rather like all the other ones :P. (Then again I've got a huge collected works of the Brothers Grimm book so I've read a lot of fairy tales.)
This was really good! I like how when they started out he was happy just flirting with her a little bit, but as they story got told they too fell under a little spell, and were unable to deny their attraction any longer.
Lol, for him bringing her some bread. :D
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