I liked it. This type of relationship seems more realistic than a "happily ever after." ...it's not a very good one, but it has more character than an on-going love that is all pretty and sugar coated with rainbows and candy gum drops and rose petals and chocolate... or something. Yeah.

I can see why Riku keeps running away from Sora. And Sora doesn't want to seem weak--the nightmares--in front of Riku.

Once again, I'll say that I liked it. :)

that was cute :D

That was beautiful :] Just the way it was written, and set up, was amazing. I loved it /so/ much

Aw.

That's the sweetest story I've read yet.

They do deserve happiness.

Great job. It was... Empathetic.

~The Critic, Zoa

i love the fact that it did not end with a happily ever after, because how often do things end that way? it was very raw and real and edgy. i liked it, a lot. a few typos, nothing serious, i just am an asshole, i like to point everything out. sorry? haha. but seriously, very well done.

This was really cute and at the same time angsty. I loved it. You balanced out the factors perfectly, this was brilliant.