 ZaCloud 12/8/03 . chapter 1Wow...
Yes, I do think he would have gone insane from that. Poor Cloud. :( And that was some very well written insanity too. Though I'd suggest an R rating for the language.
Just about anyone would snap considering Cloud's tenacious grip on reality. Good job capturing that. You get my Anime Smile of Approval(tm) *_* |
 Hiruiseki 1/2/02 . chapter 1Hehehe! Oh, I'm so jealous! You write such better fanfics than me! LOL! Although I don't think Cloud would've reacted that way, I still liked it! |
 Mist188 9/19/01 . chapter 1Good story, but I'm a Tifa fan. Anyway, just don't make him hate Aeris! I couldn't stand it if he hated bot of them. All I got to say is hurry and finish! |
 Sniper1 9/16/01 . chapter 1That..was true in a way, its almost like i think cloud would of reacted if he got told early, i'm kinda glad you wrote this. _; keep it up! |
 beautiful.dreamer 9/16/01 . chapter 1Very, very intresting! I do wonder what it would be like if Cloud was told the truth at that time in the game? Would he go insane? I thought it was sad he told Tifa he hated her...boo hoo! :( It needed that sadness though! ;) Also, I hope you will have the inspiration and courage to finish this! It has awesome potential! I do think it will turn out very well! Ja! |
 Lord Belgarion 9/15/01 . chapter 1I'm not quite sure Cloud would react that way...But a great fic nonetheless! |
 DJ Akane 9/15/01 . chapter 1 Wow.I haven't seen someone look at that angle before. It's very good, and the characters act just the way I would have expected them to if things had happened this way in the game. |
 schala zeal 9/15/01 . chapter 1Tifa, that was incredible! That is exactly how I think things would have happened... Everyone always says that Tifa should have told Cloud the truth, but what about the reprecussions of that? I think you've shown through a wonderful, simple yet elegant story exactly what would've happened. Great work! |
 Casey Crystal 9/15/01 . chapter 1 Interesting. I like the idea for the story. It was creepy though in the way Cloud changed dramatically, but written very well. Great job! |
 jade 9/15/01 . chapter 1 Oh drama for your baby mama |
 Mako Thunderbird 9/15/01 . chapter 1Woah! A little bit different than what I thought it was gonna be. Still good though! |
 Tifa Gainsborough 9/15/01 . chapter 1With this story I will be updated less in the near future. This will be my last story for a while. College... ick. |