This fic is awesome!! It's written so well. Everyone's in character, it flows, it has an amazing, creative plot and it fits. And I really hope you continue it cause I'm really eager to find out what happens!

After reading all the chapters, I have to say I like Yuffie's POV better than third person. It makes it so much more amusing somehow.Except for when Cloud and her were sitting on the sofa with watching the movie. That was funny.Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! :)

YAY! Another clouffie! =D UPDATE SOON!

Ugh, I've been keeping an eye on this story for a while now and there's nothing new. Is this even going to go anywhere?

Hahaha.
I love the silliness of this plot (in a good way) and how somehow, it still takes place in the 'correct' universe.
and the way you write Cloud is refreshingly neato. Not a lot of people have played the other games, thus, when they write him more mellow it's not him-ish.

ALSO, you keep him in character. delicious.
I'm off to be a sponge somewhere, tootles!

The Clouffie fic of the year.
I loved this chapter, truely loved it! Yuffie is in character, Cloud is drunk and Leon is dot-dot-dot.
Lol Your sense of humour is so the style of Yuffie that it was so hard to wonder off into 'idontthinkshe'saythat' ville. I'm reading this to the end then searching threw all of your other. What a superb opening!

love

Hahaha, This story is great. Too bad it hasn't been updated in a while. Acts of desperation tend to have a way to bite people in the ass. I would really like to see how this developes.

well as far as I know he just doesn’t eat. He simply maintains his shape and form by pure will power alone… M…
lmao
oh and update soon

Do not mess with a pregnant lady. Oh do not even go there. I have lived with three pregnant women, thankfully not at the same time, and it is hell.

Absolutley Hilarious! (I'm turning purple here) HEHE! I love this story! keep updating.

I like your reference to the actual Aerith death in Yuffie's daydream in paragraph 1. Lol! Poor girl thinks she has a wild imagination, little does she know! Anyhow I thought it was clever.

i actually love this fic (:
i never thought of yuffie x cloud, but now im liking the pair
there should be more fics on them
and i love the story
and yuffies personality! most of the stuff she says makes me laugh
anyways, your a great writer and hope you update soon :)

Whoo this is such an awesome story! I thought I'd never find a Cloud/Yuffie story! I can't wait to read more and sorry about you Halloween sickness. You're preaching to the choir here. (I got sick every year around Halloween up until a couple merciful years ago.)

Until next time,
KoH

i...for some reason cant view the fourth chapter?

YAY! Now update! :D:D:D