I know you haven't updated this in over a year, but if you were ever thinking of continuing, please do. I like how this is going, and I really wanna know why and how it gets shot to hell.

oh my gosh, what... WHAT? you so did not just leave it like that. nope.

you ever going to update this?

Dude.
You need to update this.

And, honestly, I just do not get how your stories have so little reviews!
I really hope you know how many they deserve.
You're truly magnificent. Absolutely stunning writing is, like, your lowest point.
And for that, I both hate and love you.

Anywho, back to the point: update, please?

another wonderful sad uplifting story. You have a real knack for making me smile and want to cry all at the same time. And an ear for the quality of real speech and real thought, both of which you capture excellently (the 'go get 'em, tiger' sequence is a good example).

Is there going to be more of this story? I hope so, because the start is very promising, and more bad writing of this quality is always very welcome :)

Mm, how about I forget everything. But mostly that last sentence.
I know it's just a story about people who don't exist but I'm hyperventilating.
And even in the beginning of this when nothing truly bad had happened yet, I was crying.
You are amazing. And you twisted my emotions. And I hate it..

^^

u... I love this too

I can't say this a bad writing.. cause this keep me reading from begging to the ending...

its just great ^^

very cool. i can't tell you how much i laughed!

...what do you mean more bad writting? this was awesome!

loved it, keep writting?

oh you have a beautiful voice.
your imagery reminds me a LOT of dreaming of monday mornings.
and your dialogue reminds me of a song.

it's just.
everything about this story is basically gorgeous, okay?
and i can't wait for the next chapter.

i like your writing a lot i like how everything plays out and you don't go into detail about every part it's just the important bits

good work
keep it up :D

Kyaa! I love it! Please don't make it a sad ending in the... end.
Eh.
Thank you very much for writing it, and please update soon?

._. And they lived happily ever after D:
It's definately off to a good start. And I like the fact that it's pretty realistic-like..they're not already making out after JUST getting together. xD Poor Kairi..rejected.

Can't wait for more. :D *thumbs up*

Would it be wrong of me to just pretend that last sentence didn't happen (as cool as it was) and just act like that fic came to a total adorable end? Probably ^^; I'm going to be scared now to read the second part. Ahaha. I'll probably... I don't know.

But I kinda wanna know what happens. Gah.