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Lacuna Lily
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abuseYou have a knack for writing amazing poetry.

I felt this piece descriped the way of the shinobi perfectly especially the line about 'children stripped of their youth'. The symbolism was excellent and it all flowed beautifully together.

I look forward to seeing more in the future. I mean it when I say that you're talented.

Ja ne,
~Lacuna Lily~
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