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| Lacuna Lily 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseYou have a knack for writing amazing poetry. I felt this piece descriped the way of the shinobi perfectly especially the line about 'children stripped of their youth'. The symbolism was excellent and it all flowed beautifully together. I look forward to seeing more in the future. I mean it when I say that you're talented. Ja ne, ~Lacuna Lily~ |