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| rainefan 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this. I liked the shift in tension (for lack of a better work) at the end. Great work! |
| LocoGreggo 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat job. |
| lulabell223 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseso sweet and true! the way you gave all the history first was genius! i love the description and everything. wonderful one shot. and i absolutely adore the last line "And waiting for his life to begin? that scares him to death." / it's so sweet and romantic and i love it! --Jenn |
| ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseTo coin a phrase favored by my Dad, good stuff Menard. So sweet |
| katydid13 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abusewoohoo, this is some seriously sweet piece of a Fiesta story. love it |
| feathergirl926 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseAw, love it! The idea of Flack being so petrified about proposing is so cute. |
| Spontaneity 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| The Little Corinthian 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseAww. I love Flack. There's nothing else to it :0) Love it! |
| IluvPeterPetrelli 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI love it. Plain and simple, it was so sweet. |
| hockeymom 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseSo cute I love it. Big Bad Don brought down by a woman. |
| Prefect Rachel 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, pretty much the cutest thing ever. I think I have a toothache. I love the list of chances he took, my favourite being turning in his best friend for swiping candy bars. |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseAwesome |
| foxdvd 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI've only one thing to say about this story: Perfection |
| mabelreid 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI love your take on Flack's life up till that moment. If figures that a proposal to Stella would turn him into a freaked out tower of mush! |