Oooh, I like this. How 'bout some more?

Nicely tied up some loose ends with this. Would like to see you go further with this. How did Elisabeth die?

This story is really inventive and could really be the way Ian's predecessor could have fallen into Irons hands. Great story so far...;) witchbladefans/start

I like the approach and the lead in, well-written. You might want to change it slightly so that it is the journal of two or three different characters, just for a touch of "artistic consistency".

History has always been one of my favorites. And it's great that I can find a story like this, that also has historical events in it. Historical fiction. I wish there was more of it. Please continue the story.

I like your mixture of WWII history with the WB comic and tv show. It was very interesting and I liked the parallels you've drawn between the past incarnations of Jake, Sara and Ian with present day ones. I hope you can find the time to write more for this fic, its really quite good.