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| Elliesmeow 2008-08-19 ch 21,  | abuseVery interesting. I may not always understand the "ramblings" but I'm always entertained by them. I loved Carolyn giving Vaako a hard time and Riddick's line about his plans to do and say something badass.LOL Looking forward to the next chapter. -Ellie |
| Hope K. 2008-08-15 ch 21, | abuseWhat a cliffie! You are trying to kill me, aren't you? You know the suspense will kill me! Cruel, very cruel! :-) I want to read another one of those great chapters very soon so cake is on its way. |
| MythStar Black Dragon 2008-08-13 ch 21, | abusewonder whats next on the stop of theres maria |
| MythStar Black Dragon 2008-08-01 ch 20, | abuseDamn he cut her and she was asking to die scared he might actually do it next time maria |
| FitMama 2008-07-29 ch 20, anon. | abuseI love this dream-like sequence. You're doing a fantastic job telling the tale. |
| Hope K. 2008-07-29 ch 20, | abuseDry? Come on ... it's freaking hot. Riddick is. And if Carolyn doesn't want to ... I definitely do ;-) Imam's appearance was ingenious and I can't wait for more. So cake and a pretty big PLEASE are on the way. |
| Elliesmeow 2008-07-28 ch 20, | abuseI loved the line "my give-a-damn's busted!" That cracked me up. Specifically why did Carolyn send Jack to Crematoria? By then I know Jack was no longer the scared sweet kid they knew back on the eclipse planet. She'd probably racked up a few sins to her name but usually it's something big to change you from friends to enemies. I'm curious. -Ellie |
| Elliesmeow 2008-07-20 ch 19, | abuseVery interesting sequence. -Ellie |
| MythStar Black Dragon 2008-07-20 ch 19, | abusethat was intresting and a bit hot maria |
| Hope K. 2008-07-20 ch 19, | abuseThat was soo absolutely worth waiting for! I think I even forgot to breath while reading; but isn't breathing overrated anyways? Long chapter but don't you think for a second that it's been enough for me. I want more! Ok - not raised in a barn - PLEASE! Have some hot Brownies with icecream on top to make you write more. |
| yourmaster 2008-07-02 ch 18, | abusewow, love it...its not over is it? NO! OO! |
| AndBeAVillian 2008-06-30 ch 18, | abuseHm. I like your Carolyn in this chapter, I think it fits her. But (its still very good, not saying it ain't) how interested is the elemental really in "good" and "evil"? Elementals calculate, and the moral extra just seems a tad out of place. Thats all. Good job! |
| MythStar Black Dragon 2008-06-30 ch 18, | abuseAwesome love thesse two banter back and forth so great Maria |
| Hope K. 2008-06-27 ch 18, | abuseI hope the next update will come as soon because I'm biting my nails until then! |
| Elliesmeow 2008-06-26 ch 17, | abuseVery, very interesting. I especially enjoyed Vaako's perspective there at the end. I hope there will be a new chapter soon? -Ellie |