Reviews for In Sickness not Health

Reviews For: In Sickness not Health

Ayrtha21keybladewielder 2008-02-26 ch 1,	abuseGreat Story! I really, really like it! ~Danyi
KelinciHutan 2008-01-27 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this story. It's sweet and I think Ten/Martha is probably my favorite pairing. They have a really good interplay, and Martha is just clever enough to keep the Doctor on his toes. :) A little bit of concrit: I think your characterization is a little shaky towards the middle, during the big fight scene. Martha's response after "you're hardly the type to say 'no.'" aside from not really ringing true to something she'd say (I think), is a little long for someone who is having trouble breathing to get out in one go, even if she does burst out coughing after. And the Doctor's defense of her, while I do think he would defend her, doesn't strike me as something he would actually say, either. I think his response would be much more biting, and take much less time to say. There are some minor grammatical errors, as well. "Oh go on then, twisted my arm.” should be "Oh, go on then, twist my arm." There are a few other similar instances, but I can't find them off hand. However, I do like the playful friendship vibe you have between the Doctor and Martha. It's very true to canon and completely sweet. The bit near the beginning where Martha asks him to stick around is quite nice. And their conversation at the end, where the Doctor asks Martha back to the TARDIS is very well done; I can almost hear their voices. Overall, I very much enjoyed it. Good job.
Gamine Madcap 2008-01-27 ch 1,	abuseOkay, so maybe a little cliche in some parts, but you get bonus points for not throwing the Doctor and Martha in the sack together. Keep up the good work.

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