I must admit I really enjoyed this story. I am a little confused and would love to see a prequel to this explaining how they all got back together and how their relationships started.

I would also enjoy a sequel too, to see how it all ends or continues (I am hoping for the latter). Nice cliff hangar I hope you don't leave us hanging too long. ;)

The only improvements that I can think off is letting the reader know who is talking as a few times I had no idea who said what.

That being said I am still looking foward to any future stories in relation to this excellent job.