I really liked the piece "When Dreaming Ends" I think that you got the feelings of the characters well

This was very good. I like the way this was written and it makes you fefel the person's emotions

I read them all and I loved them! It took me awhile to get used to your style, but now that I am I am excited for the next installment

A nice couple of poems there. One thing I don't get: Does the interlude at the begining suggest that other writers will contribute to this tome?