“Galinda, no offense, but get out. I need to kill Fiyero, and that means I need fewer witnesses.”

I can so picture this happening!

My ain't that wonderful. What a relief it had a good end

The comedic aspect has worn off by far. It's frightening now.

My what a mess this fanfiction is. A web of revenge and counterrevenge, potions, problems. Oh my

Intriqueing

Spiffy

Beautiful. Scary. Odd. Wonderful.

Still incredible nice awesome fanfic

My wasn't that wonderful

Hahaha oh my. That was cool. Neato.

Pretty good

Interesting

Splendid

Sheesh. Hahaha I can honestly tell Fiyero tried really hard to resist and behave. All three characters are written great.

I believe you meant hunt not hurt.