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Reviews for: Standing in the Way of Control
Dr. Robin
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
hey, i really loved this. it was so sweet, and i could really feel the tension between them, too. great story!

Robin
ode to melancholy
2008-02-09 . chapter 1
O.O

You nailed this. "They had a strange friendship; they both knew that. It was like the physical side of a relationship was stripped away, and everything that was left was heightened, intensified. She spent the nights at her boyfriend’s hotel, wrapped up in unfamiliar sheets, and hurried away as soon as light knifed through the drapes." Beautiful and true and wow... I don't know what to say (er... type).

In any case, I have to agree with Jen. Gimme more, gimme more, gimme more!! ^_^
Jen
2008-01-27 . chapter 1
(I can't remember my login. Wow. It has been THAT long.)

So, Carby is this not-so-long-ago part of my past that tugs occasionally and aches often, and you hit the angst/friendship of their season seven dynamic that I loved (back when everything was so good and full of promise in that painful longing sort of way).

I MISS THIS. And your writing still rocks. And MORE PLEASE. *wooks* (OMG I USED WOOKS SO NOW YOU HAVE TO).
Sail Away Mayday
2008-01-27 . chapter 1
Nice piece of writing! A good look at Carter and Abby's relationship.
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