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shelwyn 5/19/11 . chapter 5
I just can't help but review! The ending to this chapter was great.
caraniente 9/4/10 . chapter 27
Gotta say, that was excellent writing. Plot, good characterisation, and I genuinely laughed aloud when Akamaru did the Sexy no Jutsu as Kiba... hehe. It's really nice how the characters develop and grow up a bit as the chapters move along, and the last chapter particularly seemed to capture the mood of the gang.

Such a pleasure to find good writing in the mass of high school rubbish that is the Naruto fandom :)
Rae Shadewalker 4/17/10 . chapter 27
Fantastic story! I do hope to see more of this at some point, but even if I don't, Great job!
Jacob'sSecretDefender 4/8/10 . chapter 12
I agree... dogs should be our friends. We shouldn't punish them like that. It's our cruel faults that the german shepards and pugs are like that
Lily Knotwise 2/7/09 . chapter 27
Ya for catching up. Man, I love this story. I always forget how much I love stories. But I guess that's a good thing, 'cause when I read it again, it's awesome and new all over again.

You've really got the characters down, and I especially enjoyed this chapter, with all the rookies chillin'. It was a fun chapter, but also really serious and I really liked that.

Keep up the good work! :D
Zencry 12/22/08 . chapter 6
My nephew is a beast to my gram's dog. i have been trying for weeks to teach him the meaning of "nice"
Zencry 12/22/08 . chapter 5
Gloves are good things.
Zencry 12/22/08 . chapter 4
aw but he loves him!
Zencry 12/22/08 . chapter 3
nice job on this chapter. i liked the he is not my master bit.
Zencry 12/22/08 . chapter 2
gross, super squirrel does not sound like a good situation. i think i'll go oon a picnic with shino. I'm pro veggie, we would have fun.
Zencry 12/22/08 . chapter 1
this is a really cute idea and i love your summary.
FluffyBiscuits 12/14/08 . chapter 27
Poor Akamaru. If only he could speak and tell people what they need to do.
eggomilburnigan 12/12/08 . chapter 27
This chapter was really sweet and thoughtful in a way I can't articulate further. Akamaru is a very perceptive, wise dog.
Joyeu 12/10/08 . chapter 27
y'kknow, generally when i see that a story has yaoi in it , i run screaming. it's not that i'm a homophobiac, but it's just that most authors write it in a very unbelievable, almost unnatural way. i am however proud to say that you've done an excellent job on it all, and that reading from akamaru's point of view is incredibly intresting. keep up the good work, i look forward to reading more!
Ziazan 12/7/08 . chapter 27
Akamaru's right, everyone should stop pulling a Sasuke by not talking, and instead talk about him behind his back, because it's not like he'll care anyways D:
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