I love the whole fairy tale feeling to this fic!

Just the whole Yohji-obsessed-with-Ken thing is a little weird... isn't Yohji Ken's cousin? How does that work?

And so far not much is mentioned on Ken's point of view; How he thinks of Ran, how he regards Yohji, if he's met Omi and thinks of him highly or lowly (probably highly since he's Kenken! .)

Great fic, I'd love to see it continued!

bffimagine

the beginning was a claasical start and really caputred my attention, not to mention the fact of a chibi Ran plotting to tease an even kawaii Ken. the first chapter was great. i loved it. it made me laugh thinking of Ran, so cute and young,yet so serious and feared at the teder age of five. it makes me just want to hug him and make him smile that special smile that he keeps hidden. chapter two was great, i liked it, especailly the part of Ran and Ken in the royal gardens toether and the way Ran is so in tune to Ken and cares for him alot. it was so great when he carried Ken to his room and how he worried about him and held him in his arms as ken fell asleep. so cute! they're adorable together! _

chapter three was also great. i love Yohji and his over protectiveness and possessiveness of Ken but i ove the fact that he puts Ken's happness before his own.

this last chapter was great and i hope to read your future chapters for this great story. it's a great beginning and i just know that this story will be even greater with futrures chapters.

keep up the great work! _

its a really good fic udpate soon cant wait to c what happens next ja ne

It's really good WK fiction, please continue the story. I like Ken in this tales so muchhhh.

Aww...this story is so absolutely sweet. I love fairy tales. Dun dun dun! Enter the bad guy! I love the Ran/Ken soulmate stuff too. They are my favorite pairing and I have no one to blame but you! _

Continue this beautiful fic please?*puppy eyes*

YAY! Finally you updated! Thank you soooo much! It wasn't bad! What are you talking about Tschu? It's great! sighs in contentment I was wondering if you'd ever get this out! Write more, ne? Ja!

Sugoi!

Ive read it through till the last chapter you've posted...and.. its soooooooooo nice! The characters are all beatifully written and described.,,,, cant wait to read the nexts... will omi's getting more part?...and will Ran got caught entering kens room without permission again?hahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...KoKKAI!

now, you are not trully relly gonna post the 4th chapter b4 october rite? Dang it Your a SADISTIC if you really really honto no honto do it!

please keep on writing yah! i really like your stories..

ja! !

OH MY GOD YOU ROCK! This was complete and utter WAFF and I LOVED EVERY SECOND OF IT! sighs I was in desperate need of my Ran/Ken dosage... THANK YOU! I can't wait for chapter 4! Keep it up! PLEASE!

hey, get some more chapters! I'm really enjoying this story! Pleas e-mail me when you do update it.

-Fan

*grins evilly* Take THAT, Yohji!

...*waves* Hey again Tschubi-chan! Just taking up space, I guess...and telling you to write more, RIGHT NOW! *_*

*grins* Okay, so I should have signed in...

well Tschubi-chan, since you reviewed mine i thought i'd return the favor...and because i love RanxKen! *squeal* but...but...YohjixKen? *pouts* Ran should have him...coz Yohji is mean! *_*

Very nice. Ja ja, I'll stop rambling on and on and I'll just finish this. Even though i have LOTS more to say to Yohji...*glares* ...coz he knows that Ken is mine, anyways. *wink*

Anou...please make Yohji into an old hag...*dies* that would be so funny...um, no offence, Yohji *smirk*

And Ran IS kawaii!

-Capella no da

I love this story! It's great. I can't for more. Please post more soon!

Ah! Please! Write more. It's awesome, I love it.

oh man, write more soon please! It's so cute that it's making my teeth rot... i need more i tell you! oo;;