Sweet you updated! I love the new chapter I hope you update one of you stories again soon!

I really wish you'd continue this series. While the reboot is nice & all, I actually prefer the original - Jupiter's Thunder, Nabiki, Makato (especially Makato), EVAs, and all that. Even the Pokemon. Personally I think you could have kept going with this to the point you'd be up there with the famous 'Undocumented Features' mega-crossover.

crazy... but nice.

hehe. Celia is my fav char now :P

yay!

^^ Finally. A great chapter. :)


Last time I was so glad to be reading this was when i read your SI FIC Part1. lol.


Glad to be reading. ^-^ Nice writing.

Cool I do wonder what there mission is in pokemon


Thanks for sharing.

Cool story. Not many SIs are this good. I just read through all of Not Another SI Fic today and I liked it. The only plothole I saw is where's Mara? She was present on the ship when the left the Ranmaverse but she's never even mentioned again after that. It might be a future plot point but it's kind of odd that no ones even mentioned her.

Great story but please update again soon! I'm starting to suffer from withdrawal

They really mugged that planet!

That was some depth I didn't expect. Excellent work.

Ranma seems a bit... much.

Good chapter. Its an interesting setup.

I sighed. "Sure Ranma. Beat up the stuffed animal. Shinji, Mei, come on; lets go set up camp."

*snicker*

I suppose so. I kind of assumed you just beat up the principal for the job.

LOL! Only in Nerima does that actualy make sense.


I like the switch in gears to a more lighthearted universe, but I gotta
say I don't think Kyle would choose to let Makoto go on another team
when he could spend some quality time with her on a world that isn't
in massive danger.

Loved the bit with Akane.

LOL!

Looks like a great idea for housing the population.

Pokemon universe?

PLEASE UPDATE!
I'm loving how you're mixing everything up here as I've mentioned in previous reviews. I really want to see how things turn out and just exactly what new Pokemon you acquire for the new ship (and its crew) along the way.

Hey, don't smack yourself around too much. Your writing schedule has vastly improved over how it used to be, so its all good.

Also you've definitely got character interactions down well now. I actually more look forward to seeing how the characters deal with other characters, then the big BOOMs.