I think you did quite well with the lemon, it was mature and still exciting. I am happy that he finally decided to give in and mate with her, maybe this will calm their urges and emotions a bit. It was funny when he was so ready and told the maid to get out and Kuenai lol. Well done!

LOL!! You know I think Daken was a bit attracted to Rin when he met her in her demon form. I wonder what Lady Shiroihana is up to as well, she will definitely want Saya as her heir if she sees that crescent moon on her forhead. I hope that even though Saya and Hanone are being raised separately that they will still have a chance to see each other as well. They were creating a special bond. Okay when Saya finally went to Rin I was in tears, aw that was so precious! I agree with Rin, Sesshomaru did have bad timing at that point lol. It seems like her anger was sparking something else between the two as well, it reminded me when Sesshomaru and Ginrei first slept together. Seems like Rin is only outwardly agreeing to the two pups. I like how you're showing Sesshomaru's emotions on the brink of cracking open with the thought of losing Rin again, nice!

Very good chapter! Yes Rin and Sesshomaru have alot to think about. I'm sure it will all work out in their favor though and Saya's siblings will love her as she is. I'm sure Sesshomaru will put a big distance in between Rin's pregancy(ies) to prolong her being with him longer and remaining a demon. Saya will eventually open up to them I believe as soon as shes gets more comfortable around them and Rin. I don't think she(Saya), Aki, Koinu, or Inuyasha have much to worry about. They are going to see each other again I'm sure. I'm so behind with my reviews ugh, I see the story is complete! Oh well, okay I'm about to read 40 now!

WOW!! I feel like I haven't made a review in years!! LOL! School and work study has taken up so much of my time! This was a chapter I have been looking forward to reading! Saya's long awaited reunion with her parents was so intense, sad, and touching all in one! I know it was hard for Inuyasha to let her go, especially after caring for her for so long and dealing with the times she was freighten of them, Rin especially. I know this whole transition is hard for Rin as well, but it'll start getting better now I'm sure. Nice chapter, I'm off to 39 FINALLY!! LOL! How are the wedding plans coming along?

Hi, I have read all your older stories and I just read return in 2 days time..( with breaks here and there, I do have small kids) My next step is to read innocense. I just wanted to say I love your stories and these "series" you wrote with all the characters and your own ones too are wonderful stories. I have laughted, cried, smiled and "lived in" these words. You are deff a great writer and should be proud of your accomplishments. I looke forward to reading innocense and any other stories you will write. Thanks for the lovely reads.

nice, it had to end sometime. poor dejected saya. oh well. now im off to innocence

I'm sad to see this story end, but you did a wonderful job at it. I really hope that Saya and her little brother do eventually bond. I know sibling rivalry can be bad (I apparently tried to get rid of my baby brother on several occasions...much to my mom's amusement and concern!), so I'm hoping that it will all work out; I don't hate my brother as much any more (lol). I now wait for updates on Innocence, and hopefully won't have to wait too long for your next story.

Excellent ending I feel that Saya is a bit more fleshier in personality and can't wait to see how this continues in innocence.

Another great chapter

my, very very good! incredible chapter, great work...


HawkAngel

This was one of your greatest stories that I enjoy reading very much. Towards the end of this chapter/story that you may have another story here in which I hope that it will come out in the next coming weeks or months. If you are going to do a continuation of this story, in the story will you express the growing fears that Sesshoumaru and Rin's have for Saya? Will sibling rivalry occur between Saya and Meisomaru instead of Saya and her sister? How will this upcoming sibling rivalry intertwine between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru (Shimofuri can have some involvement since he has a hanyou sister)? Will Saya leave the Western Lands and live with her uncle (so she could learn and understand the "consequence" on being a hanyou)? Will Sess and Rin lose their daughter again to Inuyasha's clan? Please, whenever you have time, can you update your fans if a continuation of this story will occur (preferrably an older Saya and Inuyasha's children; as well as Miroku and Sango children). Overall, this was an excellent story; sorry it had to end.

you know i got confused at which story i was reading for a minute i was like wait shiroihana shouls already know about saya's crescent moon then i was like wait meisomaru hasn't been born yet...lol..anyway as for the ending imma just have to say ...DUM DA DUM DUM DUM!...update your other story soon i wanna know what happens next

Oh- such a promising end... in a dark way! Saya, don't be consumed by hate! Although seeing the brief glimpse of her in Innocence reassures me somewhat :). But I can't believe this story has come to an end! It was such a pleasure reading your stories! Is there going to be another sequel after innocence, or has this concluded the saga? Whatever the case, I loved reading all your wonderful stories. Your characters are simply wonderful creations, and I can't help but love every single one of them.

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Another great chapter

I enjoy your stories very much. I can understand constructive critiquing, but when reviewer leave nasty review, I can only chalk it up as jealously and lack of vision. I enjoy reading your story and I hope that you will continue writing wonderful story like this one. Update soon.