reaally like it LOVE IT! cant wait for the next chapter!

corey

is guy gonna be in this ?
if ya will he be the same age as joise?

ooh, i think i'll like this version better. i'm a sucker for forbidden romance stories. update, and don't forget good characterization! :)

~elyn

A nice little starting chapter. Please make sure not to rely too heavily on dialogue to carry your story. It's difficult to write good dialogue, and difficult to locate good dialogue in fan-fiction. Maybe you could take a little time to go through one more round of editing.
Overall, a nice start. Perhaps consider slotting in a disclaimer somewhere. Please update - I'd like to see where this story leads to.

this looks like its going to be interesting. the beginning is ok i guess, i hope you upload another chapter soon.

M. Angel

Is this going to be continued cause it seems interesting so far.

Please write more! This is a great begining!

I'm interested to read more

I just love reading never been kissed fanfiction. Please continue with more.

Great story! I love the idea of Josie really being 17. I am glad to read that Josie is changing her image before meeting Sam. Can't wait to read more!