Aw. L should have lived 'coz he's awesome and cute. Light and Misa can die. poor Ryuk and the world has been thrown off balance and it is Light's fault! Hahaha! this story is hilarious!

omg i loved the whole thing. L is so funny

Reading crack fics in public places is NOT a good idea.

Mwhahaha now that’s the crackish crack I’ve ever read! Seriously ^__^ Well I liked the "LOOK AT THE PRETTY TRAFFIC PART", it made me laugh ^__^.

Hmm... the third to last paragraph was the only part that kind of made me laugh in my head... Other than that it felt like just a bunch of childish yelling and OOCness going on. If you choose to right 'humour' in this way then I just feel there should be more to it than incessant screaming.

The last paragraph really should have been more than one, by the way.

In all honesty, if there was anything I liked about this it was probably the way in which, near the end, it semi-resembled an old book I had which is like all these fairy tales retold in a sort of obnoxious and humourous way. I wish I could remember the name of it right now... It's something like Jack and the Beanstock and Other Fairly Stupid Tales or something.

When I look at this fanfic I really start to miss one of my dearest friends... His name's is "logic". Have you seen him? No? Yeah... thought so.
This... thing isn't even funny. It's just so plain stupid that my brain broke out in tears.