well now this is a fine story. im glad i read it.

Great story

A really, really exciting, totally nice, good, very interesting and original story.

CCAP

Quote "Apparently, Tsunade didn't trust them with the Fire Daimyo as far as she could throw Jiraiya with one of her punches and considering how strong she was that was saying something."

so in essence she trusts them quite a lot?

pretty good!

Such an outstanding story. I am glad I found this little beauty.

I absolutely enoyed this fic it makes me sad that i guess there arent going to be any more chapters i mean come on there should be more...

great story,

you made a intersting and aventful way to tie the story together.

4/5

Itachi died like a true warrior. good story 10/10.

i would probably say this should be rated m since ive seen storys that a far less bloody and have pretty much no implication of sex in them rated as m but i find that a load of crap i mean stories cant be rated m just for some bloodshed anyway there is actually a spot in the back of the neck that if you stab with a needle or something with a small sharp tip it paralises them until you pull it out and they die

kimihana well thats an unorthodox pairing i have seen kimianko before but thats it concerning him really

Loved it keep up the good work

alright pal, word of advice: commas are awesomeness but don't put them in a sentence if they aren't need. one another note you are super cool for curing kimimaro and making him loyal to naruto because i like kimimaro-kun

Make them remember WHAT FEAR TASTE LIKE!... freddy said that in the form of jason's mother in jason vs freddy. nice quote i might add

*winces* Neji's pissed.