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Reviews for: Superfluous
summersgirl2526 7/12/07 . chapter 1
aw
GOGreen13 4/12/07 . chapter 1
Awesomme!liked it alot.
Agnes Green 1/23/07 . chapter 1
that was teh most adorable story i have ever read! i love teh refrence to book 4 in the end. was that book four? either way it was lovely. ilove the detail adn character development. Althought i thought that james could have been a little more cocky but this james was cute too

great job!
lightyearsaway 9/18/03 . chapter 1
This was...cute? NO! Um... cute!
Abigail-Nicole 5/7/03 . chapter 1
It was BEAUTIFUL! Beautiful lovely happy!

I liked the entire thing; a nice, fluffy read.

I liked where you put in the 'future scene' parts.

Fluff galore! It was like cake; warm, fluffy, happy, and sweet.
Hopeful Writer 7/22/02 . chapter 1
Awwww! That was so great. I love Sirius! He was a knight. That was so unbelievably cute. James's dreams were kind of freaky though. Wonder if that ever really happened to him. You're a phenomenal... phenomenol... really great writer. Keep writing.

-HW
Misty Avalon Girl 3/4/02 . chapter 1
Hey I luved that story...please write more. I think it was very well written and Romantic ::sigh:: _
Ariana and Clara 2/16/02 . chapter 1
Wow! This was wonderful. I was totally in the mood for a romantic fic today and I came across the perfect one! Well, this is going on my favorite's list. Toodles! :O)
PrincesaSarcastica 9/18/01 . chapter 1
That was such a beautiful story. dont mind me i am just a hope-less anyways...
Ax 9/18/01 . chapter 1
how cute! i love it!
meep 9/17/01 . chapter 1
Great. I really enjoyed it- however if possible could you put it into chapters?
mery 9/16/01 . chapter 1
! loved it, you are a natrual! pleassssse write more?
Ann 9/16/01 . chapter 1
i liked it lots. i liked the setting the best
Ryan 9/15/01 . chapter 1
Really good story!
Helena Desjardins 9/15/01 . chapter 1
What a great story! Poor Severus (I'm a serious Snape fan. . . eight of my nine fics star him)! This was humorous, well crafted, and loads of fun! Well done!
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