That was really good! I don't know how I would describe it, but I loved it! I would have read/reviewed earlier but my interwebz pooped out on me. On another note, I have a good idea worked out for that Naruto story that I was supposed to have the next chapter up for. So sorry, I am in a writing mood now though. I got my birthday present early (a gamecube), and my sister's boyfriend brought over a crap load of games for me...so many distractions...I passed all of those exams, and now I have to write two stories, (one for a club(a collaborative piece) and one for an instructor who likes reading). I WILL get something up soon though...sorry about the long review of not really about your poem-ness...