Nice. Very powerful; I love the poetic repition. "Voldemort attacked today . . . ."
Man, you're good!

like i said in another one of my reviews, if you havent already, you should atart pursuing a professional writing carreer(sp?)

that's so sad...

good and sad and it relates to sept. 11 very much...

Wow, just wow.

Wow. That about sums it up. It's very powerful, and very moving. Great job. I'll look with interest to more of your fics in the future.

Whoa... your story's heavy... scarry... but nice, in a way

Wow...so...interesting, never even thought of it in these persectives...By the way..Utahn! so yeah.. later*Tracy

this is very beautiful... the events of tuesday were horrific. they will forever burn in my mind...

All... I can say is god bless you. God bless america and all its people

Awww...thats so sad! Kinda creepy...

i'v cry now 4 the paste 4 days& i live in hawaii. i don't know whar u live but her

it sad to know that i mite never see my dad or mom agin(thir in the navy)

becuse the place ther mose likly to attack is my home perlhorbr.

This was quite beautiful, even if you don't think of it as an allegory. However, I found it very similar to my own experience after the attack on the WTC.

that wuz sad.

Wow. I liked that a lot. Thank you for such a good story.