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| Shining Riku 2008-09-06 ch 19,  | abuseGreat, Shane turned out to be a thug. Not surprised. >_< Now I guess Sheena will be ok...Besides her 'accident' everything else seems to be going well! Dunno what else to say...Heh. Keep up the awesome work, and good luck with the next update! See ya next time, and take care! -Shining Riku- |
| Shining Riku 2008-09-06 ch 18, | abuseWell, Shane's a right Donkey's rear! I'm glad I don't know anybody like that, bleah... And yay! Joseph and Felix are officially freakin' geniuses! They finally got Stacy's suit fabric stuff made, so that's cool. Keep up the awesome work, and see ya next time! -Shining Riku- |
| Shining Riku 2008-09-06 ch 17, | abuseCool, Stacy's about to get a suit that fits her powers, and why do I have a feeling about Sheena here? Meh, maybe it's just me. Keep up the awesome work, and see ya next chapter! -Shining Riku- |
| Shining Riku 2008-09-06 ch 16, | abuseSorry I haven't reviewed in so long, Nintendogeek. I've been inactive, doing other stuff with my time. Well, i'm glad to say i'm back, and should be back for awhile to come. I'm sorry to see Elain and Felix break up...but maybe it will work out sometime, or Felix will find somebody else... I'd like to see what happens next, so i'll review again next chapter! Keep up the good work! -Shining Riku- |
| hermitgenius 2008-08-27 ch 19, | abuseNice chapter! |
| hermitgenius 2008-08-24 ch 18, | abuseThanks for mentioning my reviews at the end of the chapter i can't wait for all-star to get the costume and get back on the streets hopefully another arc will stop then i like this one but i miss mutant fights:( -hermitgenius PS: thanks for the reviewing my fic and pete is one of the main villians in the game also Mickeys enemy since steam boat willy |
| hermitgenius 2008-08-23 ch 17, | abuseLol know how you feal with the review thing i am nearelly going crazy wishing for 2 frcikin reviews ((not counting the one i put up myself out of anger and frusteration asking people to review) anyway enough of that awesome story man i hope to see more of it soon Hermitgenius sighing out |
| hermitgenius 2008-08-23 ch 16, | abusei gotta say you know how to make these sort of things suspensful |
| hermitgenius 2008-08-23 ch 15, | abuseW00T this was a great arc i also have to say i really loved the fight between dead pool and nightclaw the rest were ok but i belive that one was top notch keep up the good work! hermitgenius- |
| hermitgenius 2008-08-23 ch 14, | abuseLOVED IT nice fighting and the plot thickens as elaine finds out felix's true identity keep up the good work HErmitgenius- |
| Shining Riku 2008-07-23 ch 14, | abuseOh...DANG! Awesome fight chapter...but now what happens!? What else can i say? This doesn't look good! Exciting! But NOT GOOD! ON NOEZ! Ahem, anyways, with all the panic aside this chapter was incredible. Surge is your average nutcase, and Deadpool gives me the creeps, what else is new? Keep up the awesome work, Nintendogeek, and good luck with the next update! See ya next time and take care. (Please update soon? :D) -Shining Riku- |
| Shining Riku 2008-07-06 ch 13, | abuse...Something tells me that Joseph and All-star are going to have the most trouble. That's just my intuition, though! I'd like to see what happens next. I hope that the team works out all of their problems, and that Simon'll relax after this. Keep up the awesome work, and good luck with the next update! see ya next time, and take care! -Shining Riku- |
| Shining Riku 2008-06-24 ch 12, | abuseSorry i didn't review sooner! I read this chapter the day it came out, and waited till now to review. Ok, this ISN'T looking good. When have these types of badguys ever been easy to battle? And finally, Simon spills his beans...sorta. Will he finally open up, or shall he keep this all to himself? Only time shall tell! Keep up the awesome work, and good luck with the next update! See ya next time, and take care, Nintendogeek! -Shining Riku- |
| Shining Riku 2008-06-09 ch 11, | abuseHello! Sorry i didn't review last chapter. I just realized i hadn't read it yet, so i went ahead and read it then read this one, and you know it, now i'm reviewing. Interesting. I'd like to know more about this organization Simon used to work for. I dunno what else to say, 'cept i'll be sure to keep track of updates! Keep up the good work, and good luck with your next update! See ya next time, and take care! -Shining Riku- |
| Biggoron 2008-06-01 ch 10, | abuseThe story's getting more interesting seeing how the now larger group interacts with each other. I'm anticipating the next chapter for sure. Keep it up. -Biggoron |