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| xkiisstheraiin 2008-08-31 ch 1, | abuseaw, i loved this, it was great! |
| CSIgsrFANOH 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseVery well done. This was very emotional. I hope he goes after her on the show...she will heal better with him. I just completed reading all of your stories. I hope you add some updates to your WIPs. I anxiously await the conclusions to them. |
| My Kate 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abusewhat an incredibly intense piece...this is exactly what I envision will eventually happen...their bond calling him to leave and search until he finds her...and her realization it is never better alone...this was a moving, emotional piece...your portrayals are right on the money...excellent work...thanks... |
| mel 2008-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, that was really moving! beautiful story, and a beautiful idea for bringing Jorja Fox back...you should put it to CBS since all the writers have gone on strike, lol. well done!! |
| jtbwriter 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThat's good-such a heartwrenching story...thanks for the sweet ending...and the "honey"! |
| Graymoon74 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI love how you write them so perfect to character. You are truly blessed with a gift. I hope you write more stories soon =) This was beautiful! |
| microgirl 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was very emotional. I think you captured Sara's depression and Grissom's desperation to save her perfectly. This was a great read. Thank you for sharing! |
| Fayre Aiden 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautfully done! I've never been good at straight shots, so I have a great respect for those who write excellent ones. Great job, my dear! |
| Bower 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was truly wonderful! Thank you for writing it! |
| She'sAShipper 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| Sonoali 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abusewow! tear jerker! :) Loved it!! keep up the great work! :) |
| Wander52 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat a story...what an emotional storyline...wow. |
| jenstog 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abusethat's just yummy. A little sad, some depressing, but in the end... all we needed to know. Though, you could make this into a WIP I'm sure- and that would be lovely :) Thanks for writing & posting! -JenStog |