I like where this is going...please continue! love hitsugaya x yachiru!

I can already guess what Yachiru's thinking ( -.-)

But, wouldn't that make this a Kenhana romance story?

-Twinklefeather

PS UNLESS this is NOT what you were thinking :P

Interesting prelude. You have the beginnings of a good piece here. Is there any chance that you will be continuing it to explain what is going on and how things got to be where they are now?

the story is really interesting

keep it up

BB

AW i want to know what happens next please hurry with the next chapter or i might DIE!

very cute

Yeah!

Kenpachi and Unohana should definitely get together!

I can't wait for more!

Please keep writing!

Oh, oh, oh Please update soon! This is a really good story for sure!

This is great, I can't wait for more.

- Saphiranna -

cool

I like it so far! I like the description of the hair-pins! Would you happen to have any pictures of Yachiru drawn for this story?

Very nice start! please continue!

The part with Retsu-san was a good addtion!

I like it! Update, please!

This has lots of promise. Update soon.

ok. This is getting too good. And so, I'm loving it. Cant wait to see what happens next.

or what kind of offspring Unohana and Zaraki would have together. hehe