 Sweet Silence's Voice 3/19/11 . chapter 8I really like Rose. |
 TeamAroPickle 2/28/11 . chapter 8very very very good please continue or i will hunt you down and make you... lol jk :) |
 Lauren Grant 1/2/11 . chapter 2Awsome Job this was fantastic chapter. |
 Lauren Grant 1/2/11 . chapter 1I just love this story its awsome. |
 MigratingCoconuts06 5/16/08 . chapter 8Great Chapter! |
 casting-roses126 3/16/08 . chapter 1I adore this story! Just run through the chapter before you submit to make sure there aren't any spelling errors. |
 slavetothekeyboard 3/8/08 . chapter 6yay some romance! |
 slavetothekeyboard 2/18/08 . chapter 5do I smell a romance? continue soon please! |
 Queen O' Randomness 2/13/08 . chapter 5Great chapter, I like the charcaters. Is there going to be romance between Eve and Ben? |
 Queen O' Randomness 2/2/08 . chapter 4I like it, please update soon! |
 Bardess of Avon 2/1/08 . chapter 4Ack! Another TWO chapters! You really must warn me ;)
So, they've finally met the militia. I take it that this is during the movie, since Billings is alive and in his usual element?
And do I detect a romance in the making between Ben and Eve? No offense to Charlotte or anything, but she was definitely my least favorite character.
I liked how Rose told them from the get-go that they were not welcome in her home; she's a regular spitfire, that one! |
 Scottishgal12 1/31/08 . chapter 3Great story! I feel sorry for Rose that she has to take care of all the girls and put up with their fights. Looking forward to reading more. |
 OperaCountess 1/28/08 . chapter 2I like the idea so far. You got a good start!
please keep going. i would like to see were jean comes in.
And i like Rose, she has common sense and women trying to make it through makes the lpot great.
Update soon! |
 Bardess of Avon 1/28/08 . chapter 2This is an interesting idea! A group of women struggling to survive...So I assume they have no relations living nearby? Makes sense. And I assume Rose is the only one willing to brave a musket? It wasn't a very womanly thing at the time!
Some of the sentences seem a little awkward, but overall, this is good!
And I'm watching Tcheky on Addicted To Love; that man is a beast! |