HI I KNOW YOU SAID THIS WAS THE END BUT, THIS STORY IS TO WICKED TO LEAVE LIKE THIS!

GOTTA GO BYE FELICAI:

Nice. Will they rejoin the rest of the X-men later on?

YOU GOTTA CONTINUE!

good.

I am sorry to see the end of this fiction. I have really enjoyed reading it. Your eye for details and descriptions made it easier for me to visualize. I will defintely look for your name and future works.

Nice ending. I wasn't expecting Logan to come back so quickly though. However it was a great story. I wished that this was not the end though, but whatever will be will be. Great story. :)

Oh... This was just... wow. You really have a way of describing things so vividly you can just *see* them. Very very good! Sad to see it done.

I am flushing with expectation! Good Lord, writer! Your detail is as sharp as ever, if not sharper. Details, details everywhere and I can only read them in wonder how did you never make it into a full-fleshed writer! I love this. YOu know I made you my fave author!

I have been waiting, impatiently, for you to . I'm really digging this. I will try to wait patiently for more. Hint, Hint.

I've been dying to find out what happened next. Now I gotta wait again! Anyway, I love this story. Hurry up please and write more!

oh my goodness! you have got to get out the next chapter quickly! quickly say i! this is soo good. it's almost captivating... and i am so mad that the chapter is over! grrr! more soon, i have to hear his explanation!

Wow, just wow. I came here looking for stuff for my friend to read, cuz her browser is evil (I wouldn't normally be hanging around the X-men category)and stumbled upon this. Very good, nice detail, wonderful getting-into-the-character's-head.

Man that was so wrong. Logan just leaving like that, man that was cold write more, because I want to know what Logan's excuse for coming back anyway. Please write soon.

Your details are as surprising as they are wonderful. I have never read such a detailed fanfic, and this goes waay beyond my expectation. You wrought out their emotions, griefs, sadness into one very big picture that is so vast, I find myself continuing to feel what they all feel. Kudos for such a master work.

Man, I came on here hopin' that this part was another continuation of what you had on another site. ;-) Ah, well! I love this fic. Absolutely fantastic description, good phrasing and excellent pacing...definitely a well-crafted piece. Keep goin' now! Don't leave your fans hangin'.