Your not a bad writer at all! Pretty good and the plot is...different and brilliant so update soo n ;D

i love kkj! and i think i like ur story better than the anime! keep writing, bc ur story rawks!

Nice work it is amazing

You can do it! You're a pretty wonderful writer so far, and I enjoy reading your story. :] Keep up the wonderful work!

Ahaha, Chiaki/Nagoya likes Arina's work! XD

I deeply, deeply apologize for not reading and reviewing for so long. Whenever I see this updated I tell myself to read it, but I get so caught up in other stuff, that I totally forget! I apologize! *bows deeply*

And no worries, what I said before was advice. This place is crazy, so I give you no blame at all for the crowded spacing. It's quite annoying to have to double-space everything. P:

thank you for telling the day... It was getting hard to tell what day they were on exactly... also I noticed something in chapter two that would make it VERY easy for Chiaki to win... Maron has her name on her answering machine... if Chiaki were for some odd reason either in Maron's house when she got a call and missed it or he called her and she didn't answer then he would find out her name ^-^ just thought I might mention it ^-^ anywho please update ^-^

this is going way too fast for my taste but I'll stick with it. Also can you tell us what day they are on when ever a day comes up? that would be helpfull. Anywho please update.

Yay! Super cute chapter! TeeHee! You're really good at keeping Chiaki in character, love!

like it

Aaw cute!! love! please pdate soon!

It's kinda awkward. I dunno the way they interact and everything is. but anywho I must go to bed because I have many things to do tomorrow and I just wanted to review. update soon please ^-^

It was cool

pleces make more more

nice like it