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Reviews For: When You're Gone
atlarocks 2008-08-29 . chapter 1
this is such a sad story!
*sniff*
definatly best angst story ever!
luv it:)
Peace.Joy.Love 2008-06-16 . chapter 1
Totally Tear JERKING. SO SWEET. Mabye it's just me (very emotional) But i cried. And for that i am grateful.
missratava16 2008-06-09 . chapter 1
i guess im a little late with this review..hehe, oops. but i guess the later the better, right?
well, another wonderful story, chels! A+! lol
It reminds me of "When I'm Gone" by Eminem..here are some of the lyrics..
"When I'm gone, just carry on
Don't wanna rejoice everytime you hear the sound of my voice,
Just know that, I'm lookin' down at ya, smiling,
And I didn't feel a thing, so baby, don't feel my pain,
Just smile back."
Love that song, and love the fic!
Love ya more!
Missr
Arysd 2008-03-09 . chapter 1
Aww, this made me want to cry. This was very well written. ...(:
christell 2008-02-15 . chapter 1
My god, this-is-wonderful!Snif!
I'f never ever read such a sad story like this!
When I finished reading it, I had tears in my eyes!
I love it!
Tokka 4 ever!
PS: I'm sorry, if there are some mistakes here, but I'm not good in writing english...
Go on with that!
citrine 2008-02-13 . chapter 1
wow. that was really good. i almost cried...okay i cried there. happy?
kataanglover331 2008-02-09 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh...this is incredible! You did a fantastic job of putting my video into a story! I really really like this, and if I had an account, I would favorite this without a doubt! Love it! :)
OOC Guy 2008-02-06 . chapter 1
This is sad. Good job.
Ardala91 2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Wow. Sad..so sad...but great job!
TwilightG 2008-01-28 . chapter 1
It takes a good writer to emotionally move their readers. You did really well. It was so realistic that now I'm freaked that something bad's gonna happen in the series!
Solembum13 2008-01-28 . chapter 1
(sniff) that was touching. Great work!
VampDylan23 2008-01-28 . chapter 1
That's so sad! But it's really well written! But it made me cry...but it's still really good...

hm...this reminds me of a video I found on YouTube it was also called "When Your Gone"...that's ironic.
jadeddragon212 2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Sokka laughed
Aang's heart felt heavy
? Confused. Both of them loved her? It was great by the way. It really...what's the word?...moved me isn't quite right but it'll have to do.
Demonking101 2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Hey that was a very good story. But I don't like when those 2 don't get together but like i said a very good story
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