XD Oh noes! lol ^^ This really made me want to laugh out loud, wich isn't really a good thing seeing as it is.. 1:58 in the morning ^^ Please update soon, this story is really interesting!
-Utsuro
I really like this! Drunken Deidara is amusing, and your description of Sasoris' feelings about being part of Akatsuki at the beginning was really good.