*tear*

"He compared her to England, when he really meant to compare England to her." - this is a GREAT line, and very fitting. It reminds me of of Robin and Much on the hill in 1x13 - "At this moment I care more about Locksley than England." "It's not Locksley, is it? It's Marian."

Wings of Death! How sad, but after seven children, I'd want to go. Good idea with the whole greek gods thing. Very creative.

If I could afford to, I would buy you a whole box of cookies for this lovely story. Kudos upon kudos. Layers of kudos. A whole MOUNTAIN.

This is a very unique story. Lovely; poetic. The stages of Marian's life personified by Greek goddesses. I love it.

One thing: I am so glad you used Greek and not Roman names! The Greek names are so much prettier.