 kapiolani 2008-06-29 . chapter 1if only he spoke up! ;) |
 supersaiyanx 2008-05-28 . chapter 1Interesting start!
Update soon please. |
 xXxlilnoel09xXx 2008-04-04 . chapter 1Very nice. You should definately write more :D |
 julinka 2008-02-13 . chapter 1Very nice little piece of work! |
 Requiem for a Sunburst 2008-01-29 . chapter 1Interesting perspective! Short and very insightful. Thanks for posting! take care- Req |
 m. 2008-01-29 . chapter 1 Oh please don't finish it! |
 cestoche 2008-01-28 . chapter 1 short, but great! :) |