Very hot heat memories. Very cool Zaxk exploration. To Quote Alec "He doesn't act any Brother I've ever seen." And here is a plausible explanation for his attract/repel relationship with Max in late Season 1. Some really great lines in this, so thanks for lavishing care and attention on dear Zack.

Ginger

I hate that this is so sad, but I so love the way it gets in his head and changes the way you see the whole scene.

OMGosh! That was so gutwrenching, heartbreaking, perfect. It made me absolutely melt. I'm usually MA first and only second MZ, but this might make me rethink things, at least to a certain point anyway- after all, I can't imagine anyone looking at A and not falling hard. But I've always liked Z, and now with this fic, all I can say is I really, really hope that you've written other MZ fics that end happier 'cause I'm going to check them out :)

There isn't a whole lot when it comes to MZ, so I haven't really decided if it's a ship I could get into... but this was interesting. It was a nice reminder that there is more than MA out there haha. Great work.

Wow. That was just freaking awesome!

short, sweet, and very original. kudos to you!

Awesome!! I loved it!

Thanks for this. It was a beautiful Zack story. And like his life, so sad. Max never really looked at him and therefore never realized what she was missing on. Nobody sacrificed so much for her as Zack did. Too bad she was just too blind to see it.
Great work with this story.

Whoa. Intense and beautifully written. Never really liked Max/Zack, but this story is brilliant. Great job!

Wow. That was intense!

-Ellie

Okay, I was never one for the Max and Zack, too close to family for comfort...but this was just too damn heart breaking to not like. It makes me look at Zack in a completely different way, and his little crush on her isn't as creepey as I once thought. damn good writing