I think we need the prequel for this story. I haven't reviewed your work until now, but I've certainly enjoy reading it. Nicely done. You are spot on with the character's personalities.

THAT WAS AMAZING!

Forgive the late review...but I just had to comment. What a fabulously heartbreaking story. And I have to admit that Johanna's comment of "I guess it doesn't really matter" had me frozen and wide-eyed before I even read the next line describing Abel doing exactly the same thing. Frightening how you've been able to capture such feeling in your readers and make them feel for the characters, but this does seem to be a trademark of your writing that personally I find wonderfully compelling. Very nice work, as always!

It's almost un-Godly (ironically enough) how amazing this piece was. It's so scandalous, but you manage to avert the reader from that aspect, and make it respectfully fluffy (even though I hate the term). It's genius.

Poor Abel seems a bit confused. Is he starting to have feelings for her? If so, then I feel bad for Esther.

I love all these little vignettes that you're writing about these characters. Once again, a piece that's funny yet sad or poignant.

I'm dying to know what actually happened, because Abel's memory seems to be a bit at odds with Johanna's logic. ;) I suppose they may never really know, but it's so much fun to speculate.

I suppose that could have been worse. Still, they could get themselves in plenty of trouble just the same.

...-twitch- um.../please/ /please/ tell me they didn't...

Very nice work. I love all the random off-shoots to this story.

That is both hilarious and wrong (for comic reasons). Nice job at it!

Hi there. Glad to see you're still about and kickin'. ;)

Ah, poor Abel. Whether his memories are real or dreamt, you have to feel sorry for him. What an emotional roller-coaster for him to experience in such a short time (despite his age, one has the impression that he's quite young emotionally). I wonder, too, if Johanna really believes her own logic? Of course, it more than likely is the truth. Here's hoping that this won't put a strain on their friendship. Are you planning a follow-on vignette?

Query: do you have anything planned for Leon in the near future? No, I'm not hoping for a romantic interlude, lol. But, the dynamics (of friendship) between Johanna and Leon are also interesting. Plus, I like the way you write him -- you've really nailed his character. :)

All the best.

Aww! Kinda sad, but a bit funny, too.

I'm glad you updated. I was starting to run out of things to read, and wondering when some of my favourite authors would update. ^^