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| xiolajane 2008-04-25 ch 4,  | abuseI think your crossover idea is great- very fresh & new. I hope we get to see some s/v soon. The interaction between them is my favorite part of alias. I like "lost", but I do hope things stay more on the alias side, storywise. Also, thanks for the good grammer & spelling (only noticed one mistake). Nothing intrudes on a story like glaring errors. Keep up the good work! |
| Mundane0 2008-04-23 ch 4, | abuseI like this chapter as much as pervious. The form is still great and you mus be really creative person :) Personally I don' like the frendship between Irina and Sloane and I would like to see more Lauren but these are just my feelings :) Good job keep writing :) |
| Agent_Kane 2008-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, this is me, the author, too lazy to sign in :p. Thanks for the reviews, I just wanted to let everyone know that this is NOT dead, but I have just been very busy as of late. Keep reviewing and checking for updates! :) |
| gymkidz2000 2008-02-25 ch 2, | abuseWow... interesting; so is Kate going to make an appearence? |
| Mundane0 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseNew story :) and i must say it's really well written, I'm really impressed. The way you bulid your story it's really orginal. "privously on Alias" part is really helpfull, becos in many stories it's a bit unclear what have happend and what not, and even what in timeline. Very good job :) Hope you will keep going. and nice refference to Lost :) |
| Rach2503 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's a great begining, i'm really curious to know what happen in the next chapter! i hope you update soon! |