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| USA-Jeanette 2008-10-05 ch 5,  | abuselove it, hope you continue with it. it was interesting to read a story that was not harrycentric... though i hope we seem him in the future. hurry and post again soon... please. |
| Stripy sox roc 2008-09-18 ch 5, | abuseHi, Firstly I'd like to say I love the story! You've combined two of my favourite things! However I do have one little bit of constructive critisism about your use of the word "British", firstly, no one has a British accent, they don't exist. You either have English (Ron, Harry etc.) Scotish (Prof. McGonagall), Irish or Welsh (can't think of examples for those). And you also wouldn't say they come from Britain, we generally prefer you to specify which country. Otherwise it's like if Europeans were to group the US, Canada and all the Southern American countries, whilst they're close in many respects, they are seperate. But anywho, keep up the good work! |
| luvsbitch95 2008-09-09 ch 5, | abuseThis story is like one of the best csi/hp crossovers i've ever read! |
| angry penguin 2008-09-01 ch 5, | abuseI do not know why, But I expected Sara to be a witch. Any way, great job. Grissom actually being a friend of the family. Brilliant. Cannot wait for more. |
| CSIvHP11 2008-08-16 ch 5, | abuseyes, lets just forget the freaking deaths, good chap, cant wait for more:) |
| KyliedaRock 2008-08-14 ch 5, | abuseOh, an actuall realistic HP/CSI crossover with an actuall backstory, me likes! ;) This is really well written and I love that fact that you made Griss, Nick adn Archie wizrds as well. Everyone seems well in charcter too. I think I am most looking forward to seeing the teams reaction to the news!! Updaet soon please, God Bless, Kylie xx |
| the black panther 2008-08-14 ch 5, | abuseHm, interesting. I'm a Greg fan, so I just had to read this. I like it, keep going! But if it becomes a Slash. . . yeah, I'm doing reading it then haha. |
| StarShinobi 2008-08-12 ch 5, | abuseI love it!! Please update soon! |
| theAlyCat 2008-08-12 ch 5, | abuseWow, this story is just too good! I would've never believed Grissom, Nick, and Archie were wizards and that Hodges was the spy [well, I could've believed that ;] ] can't wait for the next post! |
| AiyanaStone 2008-08-11 ch 5, | abuseThis is a great story, I can't wait for more! Mrs Weasley's reaction is sure to be great! |
| Hikaru Kosuzaku 2008-07-30 ch 4, | abuseI like where this is going. Could you update soon, please? |
| otakubandgeek 2008-06-17 ch 4, | abusePlease update. I love you ( puppy dog eyes). PLEASE? |
| csifan2694 2008-06-16 ch 4, | abuseplease update soon! |
| Relishb91 2008-06-15 ch 4, | abuseLOL< wow, hurry with the next chapter, this is really getting interesting |
| angry penguin 2008-06-15 ch 4, | abuseGrissom? I am completely shocked. |