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Allybooklover6677
2008-07-27 . chapter 1
I love Marti! She is so perceptive and cute. She always seems to find out Derek and Casey's secrets too! Great oneshot. Truly amazing work
bsloths
2008-03-06 . chapter 1
Dennis is funny...keep him around! ;)

This was really cute, and I think it was fine that it was weird- nothing wrong with a bit of goofy fluff now and again. can't wait for more of these!
they're only words.
2008-01-29 . chapter 1
Great job! I love reading everyone's entries to the challenge. I'm glad more people are entering now, because when I started it there was only me and one or two other people. It's much more fun with a wider variety of stories. Update soon!
Jeni27
2008-01-29 . chapter 1
That was just funny.
Good job.
Now I have to go save the rolling pin from an 18 month old. LOL!
-Jeni
4everyoung
2008-01-29 . chapter 1
The innocencne of a child. How cute, Marti is speaking for the kids side that it is ok if Derek and Casey date.
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Oh are you kidding me? It was so cute! Derek would so say something dumb like that to try to convince Marti that he wasn't kissing Casey. Funny too! UPDATE SOON!

~Chica~
Reverse Psychology
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
That was so so SO cute! I love it, especially the end where Marti obviously was on to their little plan. I can't wait for the others =}
Seraphina Moon
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Aw this was sweet. Very well done :-). Whats this challange you're talking about?. Do you have to write 30 one shots??. Please explain it sound interesting :-)

Thanks
♥Katelyn
Mrs J Whitlock 4-eva
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
OMG that wuz hilarious! I can't believe Derek said that!
lol i'm cracking up
update soon
DemonWitch
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
OMG I love it! That was seriously genius! I can not wait to read more of your oneshots :D
Cheetah Eyes
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Ha! I loved this! Anything with Marti is automatically adorable, but this was just amazing.

Quick question. Are all the oneshots going to be connected, or are they going to stand on their own? Either way, I can't wait for more!
jeytonlover
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful and this was such a Derek thing to do!

I hope to see another one soon because I can't wait for more!
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