|Reviews for first light|
| Kuro Garyuu 2/2/08 . chapter 3
I was on the verge of tears! My eyes were watering! It's so hard to watch/read about others crying! :(
| ReneeSue 2/1/08 . chapter 22
| selinnium 2/1/08 . chapter 22
The ending was so sad. I was sniffling by the time I finished. I can not believe Charlie died just like that. It is so tragic. And the really sad song that was playing on the computer doesn't help much either. There is definitely a part of me that wishes Bella can somehow have both Jacob and Edward. I just cannot accept the fact that Bella will outlive Jacob by an eternity and Jacob have no more interest in her. Me and my indecisiveness. But I still love Edward more.
This is the best fanfiction I have EVER, EVER, EVER, EVER read and will probably remain so for a long time. The technical side of the whole story is so perfect; even if there were any flaws, I wouldn't have noticed it. I wonder how long it took for you to edit and refine it. One thing I like best about your writing is the lack of "POVs". It can be so confusing and annoying. Another is the length of each chapter. It makes reading much easier(instead of clicking the purple button at the bottom of each chapter once every 3 minutes). The writing is somewhat similar to Ms. Meyer's as well. It will be hard for me to read the "real" Breaking Dawn as it will probably be so different from this story, especially since I have it engraved in my head I had just finished reading the "real" Breaking Dawn. I absolutely cannot wait for Ms. Meyer's version.
You are such a brilliant writer so keep it up and I hope you continue writing such awesome fan fictions(or your own fiction). I will be eager to read them.
Selena(your #1 fan in
| sami1010220 1/30/08 . chapter 22
aw, that's pretty sad. great job on this fic!
| Angeliss 1/30/08 . chapter 22
That was absolutely beautiful. I'm almost in tears, here. And it isn't really that sad... It's just an end to make way for a new beginning...
| Heartbroken1 1/30/08 . chapter 5
A Beautiful Chapter!
One question though... Where is JAsper?
| Heartbroken1 1/30/08 . chapter 4
Good girl, Bella... Wedding first.
| Heartbroken1 1/30/08 . chapter 3
I'm glad Bella found a ring :)
| Heartbroken1 1/30/08 . chapter 1
I'm really intrigued!
Princess Bride is a great movie!
| Heartbroken1 1/30/08 . chapter 2
Poor Bella. I'm sure she'll come up with something FABULOUS!
| res cogitans 1/30/08 . chapter 22
That was brilliant!
perfect and fantastic in every way
I feel like I've read be now lol
I don't feel the need to read it now LOL
The end was so sad. I cried all the way through the last chapter
I think stephanie shpild employ you to write bd lol
| res cogitans 1/30/08 . chapter 18
I feel like I'm reading breaking dawn already
| Lovebugs 1/29/08 . chapter 22
I LOVED your story. Thank you very much for sharing it!
| swathidarling 1/29/08 . chapter 7
M... *sighs happily*
Wicked cute. I love how you portrayed thier lives after eclipse, even taking care of the volturi. Fluff with an incredible plot line! Just an all around good story. Yea!
| edPod 1/29/08 . chapter 22
That somehow felt really sad. ...Well, a wonderful story indeed! I hope you write more! XD