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Kay20
2009-01-16 . chapter 1
I'm a moron - I forgot to add to my email that this fic is my favorite (though the laundry one is awesome too). I love their phone convo, quite what I imagine it could be. :)
navycorpsman
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
As usual, you wrote a GREAT story! I'm not sure that there will be, but I am hoping for more to this story. I am adding it to my favorites because it's just that good! LOVE IT!
driver picks the music
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
That was great! i loved ray! they should totally bring him back! i wanted him and neela to be together, and never wanted her to marry micheal! good job!!
sunnycouger
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
*sigh* That was so great. Very believable and very sweet. I don't know why but I am on such a roomies kick right now and this was a great little appeaser.

Really nice work, as always.
methehuman
2008-03-08 . chapter 1
That was beautiful, and really realistic. I haven't wached ER in forever (due to it showing in Australia at mental times, and then constantly chopping and changing it, etc) but the portrayal of Ray is beautiful, and so was their reunion.
Don't know whats happening on ER at the moment, but I hope something along these lines eventually does!
Updates-Please
2008-02-10 . chapter 1
That was really sweet. If only this had happened on the show it would make my day. Brilliant oneshot.
SONYA
2008-01-30 . chapter 1
hey! is nice...very nice. Well! I like it!! so it would be great if you continued this story, and see what happen between the 2.
angelica
2008-01-29 . chapter 1
oh, so cute, please continue.
You are very good.

REELA PARA SEMPRE!
mrsreynolds
2008-01-29 . chapter 1
Oh boy, that's the best piece of wish fulfillment I've read for a long time. Ray and Neela were robbed, and you've put that to rights beautifully.
*sigh*
Historianic
2008-01-29 . chapter 1
A wonderful piece of writing! I liked the use of flashback, I liked how you presented Ray and Neela; you maintained a sense of realism and still managed to be incredibly romantic. All I can say is I absolutely loved this! Which is why I am asking you to please, please, please, please, please, turn this into a multichapter.This is too good to stop here; it ends on an imperfect cadence that leaves it sounding like there's more to come. Like you said yourself, "there was a lot of talking they still had to do...". Again, please turn this into a multichapter. Either way though, I love this piece of writing.
EDITH78
2008-01-29 . chapter 1
I loved it! Amazing job,Ash. I'd love to read more..;)
Henia1977
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Very nice story!
Beaglicious
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Fabulous, fabulous, fabulous - if only we could get something like this on the show, grumble. It was perfect from start to finish - Neela, blaming herself; Ray, refusing to see her until he could walk and forgetting how bad his stumps were hurting the moment he saw her. Great job!
siddika
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Amazing job and I could picture this so clearly.
browneyedgirl21
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Extremely well written. Great fic!
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