A well written story. I wondered about the technical aspects of the pregnancy, but otherwise, good.

the only wrong thing in this fiction, is the fact that she is an one shot!
Wonderful fiction!
Shigure did sleept with Ren after Akito sleept with Kureno, but your version isn't bad.
thank you

Aw! So sad! Sometimes I actually feel bad for Akito... then I remember what she did to Hatori and Kisa and Isuzu. T.T