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Reviews For: Always There
S. Whiner 2008-07-25 . chapter 1
A well written story. I wondered about the technical aspects of the pregnancy, but otherwise, good.
loritakitochan 2008-01-29 . chapter 1
the only wrong thing in this fiction, is the fact that she is an one shot!
Wonderful fiction!
Shigure did sleept with Ren after Akito sleept with Kureno, but your version isn't bad.
thank you
Zakuro Haruno 2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Aw! So sad! Sometimes I actually feel bad for Akito... then I remember what she did to Hatori and Kisa and Isuzu. T.T
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