Aw that was cute and a little sad but well done

This is great! I really liked how you tied in the events of your fic around the actual manga, and when Akito lost the baby, it was so sad! Well done; I really enjoyed reading this.

A well written story. I wondered about the technical aspects of the pregnancy, but otherwise, good.

the only wrong thing in this fiction, is the fact that she is an one shot!

Wonderful fiction!

Shigure did sleept with Ren after Akito sleept with Kureno, but your version isn't bad.

thank you

Aw! So sad! Sometimes I actually feel bad for Akito... then I remember what she did to Hatori and Kisa and Isuzu. T.T