 Rabxblack 1/9/12 . chapter 1I LOVE this. Even tough this is a Remus/Tonks, I have to say, Sirius was brilliant. You wrote him so well.
I also loved Tonks. And you know what? I hate this character in the story but you made me change my mind about her.
Great job! |
 LyricalxRose 3/19/11 . chapter 1I can't believe that I haven't read this before, especially as I've read so many of your wonderful fics. This is lovely fluff, making my evening very enjoyable. Thank you.
I really love Sirius' drunken self, it's very cute. I was a bit angry when he so rudely interrupted them, though.
Still, I do love him, so may I have that salsa? :) |
 Siriusmunchkin 8/18/09 . chapter 1Very nice. Like the premise. Definite Remus and Tonks moment. |
 T A L I A B L A C K 7/30/08 . chapter 1this is good fluff, i love it so much!
lol at snape drunk! ]
well done |
 TheNightimeSky 6/10/08 . chapter 1Aw Remus/Tonks fluff! I love it! I also like how sirius caught them. hehehehe.
This is one of my favorite couples (With Lily/James, of course. lol), and I love reading little stories about them.
By the way, I LOVE your profile 'avatar'. It's so true. Harry forgot about remus and tonks! All was NOT well with them both dead, and poor little Teddy orphaned. :( |
 madAmeSaysWhAt 4/24/08 . chapter 1Now THAT's a toughie... waltz with Remus or salsa with Sirius... howabout a jazz number with Ron? I love it, anyway. :P :) |
 Owl Emporium 2/28/08 . chapter 1That was quite sweet. Loved it! :] |
 Wouldn't you like to know 2/22/08 . chapter 1 I think that your story is wonderful, I love it!
I think you write tonks really well and sirius make a great drunkard.
HOWEVER, here come the big scary words: constructive critisism.
EEK!
anywho, sometimes you repeat yourself.. little words and phrases keep jumping out and scarung me...over and over again. try digging out a thesaurus to replace a word so you dont use the same adjective twice.
You can fall over too much.
i loved the humour in this and all but I think you kind of over did it just a little.. But then again, who am I to comment? my writing is so boring that people tend to die of old age halfway through.
All in all my dear i LOVED it! yayness! |
 Hannahble 2/5/08 . chapter 1sweet sweet sweet! made me want to be there... so sweet |
 Duck Duck Squirrel 2/2/08 . chapter 1that was great! i love your stories. can I tango with... well I don't really care who, I just want to tango. |
 The-Worlds-Naneth 1/30/08 . chapter 1I loved it! I loved the description of Remus' eyes!
'Remus’ eyes seemed to be locked with hers, and Tonks noticed what a beautiful colour they were. At first she had assumed them to be grey, but she noticed that there were swirls of navy and sky blue, and with a trace of amber at the edges. They were also lined with a faint trace of green, and the effect was quite overwhelming. She felt as if she could stare into them forever. They were probably the most beautiful eyes she had ever seen in her life.'
It's so romantic...*gazes into space*
love u!
x H x |
 Niamh Muiren 1/29/08 . chapter 1I choose... waltz! To Billie Holliday! xD
Omg, that was so adorable. Tonks did pretty much teh exact same thing I did when my boyfriend kissed me for the first time. .
A zillion hugs for you! |
 pet-munchkin 1/28/08 . chapter 1That was cute. The pace was a bit fast, but probably I'm just too slow to keep up when it's this early in the morning ;-)
Anways, I liked this a lot, both Tonks and Remus were in character and Sirius... well, it's oddly sad but he was in character, too, I suppose.
If you don't mind, I'd like to take the slow dance with Remus and the salsa with Sirius as well (because both should be fun).
Thanks for the wonderful story,
Cheers, Jord |
 the-original-hufflepuff 1/28/08 . chapter 1Oh, this is awesome! It's just brilliant, and my heart was melting and I had butterflies in my stomach from your Remus! .
I'll have a nice, slow Remus dance s'il vous plait. Easier to snog through them ;).
-Aimee x |
 Bookish Brownie 1/28/08 . chapter 1I'll take swaying to the music! That was a really sweet and amusing story! There were a few minor grammatical and word choice problems, but overall it was very entertaining. |