Beautiful.

Wow, brilliant Just brilliant. It's poetic and tragic, the language used is what I would imagine it to be had Haggard himself wrote this. Lovely!

Ah my heart is gladdened... you are no little writer, you who see beyond the tale into the mind of those least known...

For it takes a true dreamer to see the eyes of all in a story... and to make the pain known.

This is one of the most beautiful things I have read, ever. You capture everything, every emotion, every sight, with such perfection it makes me wonder.

Eloquently put. Haggard's POV is never really explained but you did a great job of doing so. Man, this story brings back memories of the book and cartoon. Loved both but you did a great job explaining his reasons for capturing the unicorns even though the original story touched upon it slightly. I really like how you explained his brief joy of Lir though. He was always aloof about his son, whether or not he was his biologically or not. I love reading your work and enjoyed this short.
~ Amerise A. Rei