very, good, I would love if you did more ;)

when are you going to write more?

please keep on writing!

This is sweet! please KEEP ON WRITING!

More! come on keep writing! love it!

Asome! Lets have more! keep it up!

Nice! keep it up! can't wait for the 5th!

this is pretty good i wold love to read more.

hey this is great! Keep it up!

Dude, that's bad!O.O More soon please!:3

you're right...definatly an overused plot line here but I'm starting to like it. anyway just a few grammical errors here and there but that's just me being picky. Very nice please continue.

...OH CRAP...It's official. Raph's NOT a romantic. Anyway, great job.^^

I Realy want to hear more! but take out the eat your soul stuff.-Pretty Stupid. Other than that, it's the best on here i've read yet! keep it up!

Great story! nice Job

No soul eating for you, I will review. I like it, but you need to work on your spelling. Make more soon!:3