Reviews for The Perfect Harmony of Hearts

Reviews For: The Perfect Harmony of Hearts

AmyAddict1 2008-07-01 ch 13,	abuseGreat update. But at the beginning you put this was chapter 12 instead of 13. Awesome detail with Shadow and Shadowpaw. I wonder if their 'friendship' will continue the way it always was. I wonder if more will happen between them. Who was Sly talking about? Who did they catch red-handed? I eager to find out. Update soon. -AA1
AmyAddict1 2008-05-28 ch 12,	abuseOh my goodness. This story is getting so good. The plot is developing so well. Drama is continuing to increase. The characters are developing well also. I can't tell you how well this story is and how much I enjoy it. You have real talent. Update when you can. -AA1
AmyAddict1 2008-05-16 ch 11,	abuseI think it was nice that you included other people in this chapter instead of just Shadow, Rouge, and Shadowpaw. So is Gabriella and her team just a random team of specialists? Or are they your or a friend's OC's? I wonder why is Shadowpaw dreaming of Shadow and in that way. I wish to find out more that happens between them. Update when you can. -AA1
AmyAddict1 2008-04-25 ch 10,	abuseWow. There was more detail and it seems more drama is happening. Great chapter. It seems that Oak and Black Doom know something about Rouge that Shadow and Shadowpaw don't know. I wonder if and when they will ever find out. I look forward to the next chapter. Please update when you can. -AA1
AmyAddict1 2008-04-20 ch 9,	abuseWow. This is some story. Quite a bit of drama is going on. I have like so many questions but I'll wait and see when they will be answered. Shadowpaw is a very complex individual. I wonder what Rogue is up to. Was she recording them or something? I really want to know. Update when you can. -AA1
AmyAddict1 2008-03-10 ch 7,	abuseI read the prologue and liked it. Is Cid Kussia's father? I really liked it. words escape me to describe how much I liked it. Chapter 7 I also liked. Did I tell you that I love how you use different viewpoints to tell a chapter? Well, I love how you do that. I loved this chapter. Keep up the good work. -AA1
AmyAddict1 2008-02-22 ch 6,	abuseI was trying to review before but fanfiction was having technical problems. Anyway, I liked these two chapters. Now that they have left they are really in for some fun, right? Things are really starting to get interesting. Great chapters. Am I the only one who reads and reviews this story? I'm happy that you still continue the story despite that you have an audience of one. Please continue when you can. -AA1
AmyAddict1 2008-02-11 ch 4,	abuseThings are getting interesting. I'm really enjoying myself. I so want to keep reading this. You are a very good author. I can really see and hear everything that is happening. Keep up the good work. Maybe the title should be 'The Perfect Harmony of Hearts,' if that's not too long. I just combined two suggestions that you gave. Your pm (in part): Okay, here are the names that are in contemplation: The Immaculate Harmony, The Perfect Harmony, The Harmonious Union, or A Harmony of Hearts Which do YOU like better? Or do you have a suggestion? Obviously, I want it to say harmony in it, because my mother said that it was more of a 'balancing the two', and I liked the idea. (Done) So that's all I did. Sorry the review is so long. Please continue, either way. I'm looking forward to it. AmyAddict1 (AA1)
AmyAddict1 2008-02-04 ch 2,	abuseIs 'Untitled' really the title of the story or is that was it is called until you think of something else? Anyway, I like it so far. Great idea for a story. Was is the other game that this is crossed with because I don't know? All I know is that 'Shadow the Hedgehog' is one of the crossovers. Please continue. And thanks for dedicating this to me. That was so kind and sweet of you to make this partially because of me. Thanks and continue. AmyAddict1

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