More please. The clock got louder and slower!

Dang, that sucks. No, not your story, the situation. The story is beautiful, and really makes you go wah. :( Poor Temari, bah. :(

damn yer stories are good! i think im faving the lot!

im bad at reviewing so dont be angry! but you have a way of capturing me so yer really one of the best! keep it up!

it's sad...but beautifully portrayed nevertheless...

He must live!

They will not be another Asuma/Kurenai!

Sad,sad,sad but that was great!

wow...there's nothing really to say but wow

Really good!

When I finished reading it, I thought, that's it!

I want MORE!

So sad! But lovely as always!

LIVE! Shikamaru better LIVE doggone it! Sorry. Sorry. Oh my. Short but really tight writing. Good job.

I vote he lives ...okay? o.o

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