Aha~! So I'm *not* the only one to sense the slashy undertones between those two! And here I thought it was just my slashified mind at work. I really wish they had developed Fuku-chan more as a character in the manga. Great manga, it was though.

Great job, you should write more fics for Fire Candy (between any of the characters).

This was a really interesting story. I wish there was more Fire Candy fanfiction out there. It's such a great series. But I digress. I really liked this. Great job!

strange... but good. I don't know, it kind of fitted the manga.

plus I love Fire Candy, so this made me happy ! I just hope you get some reviews...

That was great I loved it.